Ms Casson’s Feedback:
Magazine:Fatale
Clear and confident presentations.
Get your terminology right - long shot.
Jennifer Lopez - would she appeal to target audience? She is 55!
Your ideas seem to be a bit older for the target audience.
Like the Nigerian model aesthetic idea and the strong woman idea.
Nice website ideas-glad you have thought of the 30seconds.
Stick with the strong woman idea but give it a younger twist.
Class Mate’s Feedback:
1. Reconsider. Is the theme/aesthetic is suitable, idea is nice but maybe not 16-25, or something teens would wear
2.
- Good audience research to ensure you can reflect interests
- Like the name!! - but beware of the aesthetic appealing to the audience age
- Love the idea of your 2nd edition and the inclusion of culture
- Models match vibes and well chosen
- Sports interview compliments the represented ideology
3.
- Like the idea of magazine connecting with all 16-25 year olds - maybe use intertextuality for this?
- Maybe consider if the theme works for 16-25 year olds
- the 2nd edition is really good - wold appeal to target audience + is good idea
4.
- Good masthead
- I like the contrast of editions
- Good website ideas
5. I think the suit would work with more luxurious/ financial theming - I think the moodboard still applies
6.
- Try and be more consistent throughout
- Make sure you have a clear picture of the theme
7.
- Working masthead works well with mood board - tone it down slightly for target audience - appeal to 16-25 year olds
- Idea for first cover works with the theme
- I like use of natural and editorial backgrounds
- sports feature works well with aims of magazine
8.
- Target demographic - age appropriate
- Like the female magazine
- Not sure the location fits the theme
- Like the strong women
9.
- Try and bee more consistent throughout
- Make sure you have a clear picture of the theme
10.
- Good name choice
- Love the idea for the second edition
- Helayna sitting on car would work well
11. The name works but shift your aesthetic to be more appropriate for the age group
12.
- Add audience profile wit a specific person
- Alter first mood board - younger, more suitable
13.
- I like the name ‘fatale’- very powerful - and now this theme is reflected throughout
- Warm orange tones will look great!
